Logging in to Revision Assistant
1. Go to revisionassistant.com
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Student Resources for Improving Your Writing
Revising Your Paper: RADaR
Use Revision RADaR techniques as you review your draft carefully.
- Replace general terms with vivid details and unclear explanations with precise ideas.
- Add specific details or missing information to support your argument.
- Delete information that does not support your argument.
- Reorder sentences and paragraphs to present ideas clearly and logically.
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Transitions and Creating Cohesion
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